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belizabeth Posted at 7:43 am on Oct. 10, 2008
Southern Girl   By: Brandy E. Rogers
Short stories of actual things that have happened.

Born in 1994 on The Fort Gordon army base in Georgia on February 8th.  I am a proud southern girl but we all have our faults and our stories. Well at least I know I do.

Okay my first story of my life begins when I was in the second grade. Me and my friend Dezma were daring each other to do some stupid things. Well before I go on let me back up a little.

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belizabeth Posted at 7:55 am on Oct. 10, 2008
okay....
dropdead8883 Posted at 7:54 am on Oct. 10, 2008
no
belizabeth Posted at 7:53 am on Oct. 10, 2008
heck no...
zluvsanime Posted at 7:50 am on Oct. 10, 2008
fail, or not, i dont actually know
GongShow Posted at 7:50 am on Oct. 10, 2008
thats horrible. start over.

say this

I was sucking some guys dick and my daddy walked in on me. He wanted his sucked too.

belizabeth Posted at 7:49 am on Oct. 10, 2008
okay thanks. i'll start over.
hI jAMES Posted at 7:48 am on Oct. 10, 2008
No.  Simple answer, no.
kay dee Posted at 7:45 am on Oct. 10, 2008
You're already skipping around.
It's grammatically incorrect.
It's poorly written.

It MIGHT get you a D

belizabeth Posted at 7:45 am on Oct. 10, 2008
hmmm... i don't know.
The Artery Posted at 7:45 am on Oct. 10, 2008
why does your first life story begin in the second grade?
Chiefette Posted at 7:44 am on Oct. 10, 2008
Not really. It isn't very well written, not very creative either.
kay dee Posted at 7:44 am on Oct. 10, 2008
If you're in, like, seventh grade, sure
Dont Notice Me Posted at 7:44 am on Oct. 10, 2008
no
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