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juggalo sonic Posted at 11:21 am on Nov. 5, 2008
"Cold as winter, strong as stone;
She faced the darkness all alone.
A silver goddess; a reflection.
A mirage, a recollection.
No return; no turning back.
The past is gone, the future, black.
Serpents gather in their nests,
And she stands above the rest.
Shadows hunt; she hunts shadow.
The moon is risen; she stands below.
She views her world through the eyes of others.
Black and white; there are no colors,
As she looks down upon a shattered youth.
A shattered mirror shows a shattered truth."

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Lunarose Posted at 11:33 am on Nov. 5, 2008
i like it
paperskyx Posted at 11:26 am on Nov. 5, 2008
It's stupid.
whoami111 Posted at 11:23 am on Nov. 5, 2008
the girl in your poem sounds like a bitch
Urban Legend Posted at 11:22 am on Nov. 5, 2008
Never been that big of a fan for poetry, but it's pretty cool.
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