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Cake and Sodomy Posted at 3:20 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
Sometimes, I wonder if emptiness is a virtue,
if anger can be graceful or neat or
beautiful. I like to reach inside your mind: not to
steal your worries away, but rather
to mix your thoughts up a bit, stir your

intellectual stew and set the heat to simmer.
I can taste your murmurs, your silent protests
to breaking rules, breaking dishes, breaking bones.
We used to break the ice, just to dive under and
feel the chill.

I miss the shock of your skin on mine,
the kiss on my shoulder.

(you liked the graceful slope
and the perilous drop of my slender arms, I just enjoyed
your flattery.)
You told me to dance on their rooftops.
You told me to carry you down the Ganges as a floating temple,
a tribute to the vastness of desire. Your voices echoed in my hollows.

I asked you for salvation.
You pressed your heart to my lips
and told me to wait.

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PurpleEnvy Posted at 3:23 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
Totally savin that, you mind? :)
MindFreak20 Posted at 3:23 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
I liked it.
I like tuhtles Posted at 3:23 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
I rike it.
Cake and Sodomy Posted at 3:23 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
Quote: from Kamalli at 6:21 pm on Nov. 5, 2008

Good job at being creepy :D

Creepy how so?

cutieefaceex3 Posted at 3:22 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
that's amazing, really deep :0
PurpleEnvy Posted at 3:22 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
Wow that was actually really good.
Kamalli Posted at 3:21 pm on Nov. 5, 2008
Good job at being creepy :D
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