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cutecat42 Posted at 8:25 pm on Nov. 9, 2008
Walking amidst the trees,
Seeing leaves fall brown,
Branches blocking the sun;
How can I not think,
I am alone.

My heart belongs with the birds,
The birds nowhere to be seen,
Knowing they'll come back when they want,
How can I not think;
I am alone.

The clouds dripping rain,
Needing the bird's company forever,
And getting told that they're not ready,
How can I not think;
I am alone.

The birds in another country,
Too busy catching worms,
To even communicate with smoke;
How can I not think,
I am alone.

I am alone,

I.
Am.
Alone.
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What do you think of it? Does it make sense?  

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andi151 Posted at 8:33 pm on Nov. 9, 2008
its very good and yes it makes sense..
SEXKITTEN25 Posted at 8:28 pm on Nov. 9, 2008
hi u can add me so ur not alone smiles
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