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bongbuddy Posted at 4:05 pm on Nov. 16, 2008
i ride the dirt roads
with a bottle of jack
take a sip, hear your voice
goin faster and faster
i make my choice
i hit 90 and crash
everythings pain
cant feel my back
i crawl from the wreckage
.... with my bottle of jack
another sip, i hear your voice
then comes darkness
i welcome it

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idontwanttobehere Posted at 4:10 pm on Nov. 16, 2008
cool. even though its wrong.
Unaccepted Posted at 4:06 pm on Nov. 16, 2008
That's actually, a really cool poem. Nice work!
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