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iBritt Posted at 7:36 pm on Nov. 17, 2008
If you need a laugh, read this shit. I know it made me laugh. I am so glad I'm pass my emo poem phase

Big ass disclaimer: I wrote this in grade 9, and it's about my English teacher. He had favourites, and let's just say I wasn't one of them  

No matter what I say
No matter how hard I try
Whatever I say to you
Never enters your mind

Everyday my goal is one thing:
To let you know I exist
And she isn't the only girl whose bell knowledge rings
That is the point you've seemed to miss

Everyday I fail
Everyday she must prevail
Everyday my hatred grows more
Everyday I see she is the one you adore

I'm going to take that adoration
And snap it as I would a twig
Then you would see how much I yearn for that attention
How much I wish it was my name that you mention

One day I will prevail
One day she will fail
One day it will be me that you heil
One day you will remove that veil which covers my talents
And I will accomplish my goal

Then my hatred will die
And for that adoration I no longer will have to fight
For I know it is mine
And that is where it will stay
Every day and night  


Fin

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perfume cowboy Posted at 7:43 pm on Nov. 17, 2008
or is this supposed to be bad to be ironic? if that then i applaud this
tell me again Posted at 7:43 pm on Nov. 17, 2008
If it makes you feel better... when I was 10 years old I wrote stuff to my 5th grade teacher that I never showed her (yes, her). She also had favourites and I was obsessed. I even had dreams about beating that girl.
perfume cowboy Posted at 7:42 pm on Nov. 17, 2008
oh cool you wrote a poem about your english teacher
i can see why he didn't like you
TopShelf Posted at 7:41 pm on Nov. 17, 2008
0/10... comon...
tell me again Posted at 7:40 pm on Nov. 17, 2008
Teeheeheehehehe.

greatescape Posted at 7:39 pm on Nov. 17, 2008
10/10.
If I were that teacher I'd tap that.
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