Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Okay poem I wrote Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]hersheyparker[/m] at 3:18 pm on Nov. 18, 2008[quote]Its quite a dark theme.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post bananawhore Posted at 3:15 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Bloody knuckles Forced smiles, overdone grins Keep it coming, that happy vibe Until tomorrow comes But tomorrows always coming And today is always here And so we manage And the voice inside your head Louder, louder, louder But you don't dare say a word Critscizm is your friend The voice will make you better And stress pumps through your veins Intertwined with blood and gore And your thoughts spin endlessly Like a child on a tire swing Through your on the edge mind And emotion overcomes you close your eyes and hold onto reality Try to keep yourself alive Do what you have to do Take away the pain, and you know it's all alright And you'll force your way through Attending a never ending masquerade for your thoughts But at the end of the day It all comes down to bloody knuckles.

Replies bananawhore Posted at 3:34 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 okay what if it was called blloody wrists? tick Posted at 3:26 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Bulimia. bananawhore Posted at 3:25 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 thanks! dont steal them (jk) :) xXxLiberOxXx Posted at 3:22 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Until tomorrow comes But tomorrows always coming And today is always here Those are my favorite lines. I'm a songwriter and to me, those are the best lines right there. hersheyparker Posted at 3:18 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Its quite a dark theme. bexbex2008 Posted at 3:18 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 its alright k14nk Posted at 3:16 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 good yet you have anger issues. LucidAssassin Posted at 3:16 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 sounds violent....that was only from like the first two lines though All 8 previous replies displayed.