Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic bad poem i just wrote Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]bananawhore[/m] at 4:08 pm on Nov. 18, 2008[quote]Life is like a vaccum Sucks it all away Opinions Thoughts Fun Happiness So you have to be That thing that they call Optimistic Damn I hate that word Being happy is overrated anyways But sometimes Its what you really need Dwell on the things That make you feel the way You want to feel. The things that life Just couldn't take from you So all you have to do Toughen up Muster up that courage Look at the glass half full Or at least a fourth of the way there If the clichéd optimism Is a bit too much for you to handle And all your really doing Is salvaging lost goods All your really doing Is digging through life's vaccume bag. [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post bananawhore Posted at 4:08 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Life is like a vaccum Sucks it all away Opinions Thoughts Fun Happiness So you have to be That thing that they call Optimistic Damn I hate that word Being happy is overrated anyways But sometimes Its what you really need Dwell on the things That make you feel the way You want to feel. The things that life Just couldn't take from you So all you have to do Toughen up Muster up that courage Look at the glass half full Or at least a fourth of the way there If the clichéd optimism Is a bit too much for you to handle And all your really doing Is salvaging lost goods All your really doing Is digging through life's vaccume bag.

Replies TKDgoneveggie Posted at 4:18 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 that felt a little less like a poem than a frank pessimistic statement try to play with words a little more poems are supposed to convey an experience and use that experience to get across your message XsmilygirlX Posted at 4:10 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 It actually good.  It kinda how I feel. Lihiro Posted at 4:09 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Oh god that was bad you're right. melanie2anne Posted at 4:09 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 its good but sad :( All 4 previous replies displayed.