Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Hallelujah Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]Prom3theus[/m] at 5:14 pm on Nov. 18, 2008[quote]Staring into the mirror he stays, lost in thought. His heart, twice given, but thrice shattered, with nobody there to help him pick up the pieces. He prays, to his unseen creator, for the strength to continue on. From his lips, he drew the baffling hallelujah. No response. He spent his whole night trying to forget. He has been there many times before. Searching for a friend. He is small. He is needy. Lost himself again. He feels unsafe. Small. He strains for the elusive hallelujah. Whispers of past orthodoxies. A tear slides down his cheek. He is broken; falling to pieces. Hallelujah.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Prom3theus Posted at 5:14 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Staring into the mirror he stays, lost in thought. His heart, twice given, but thrice shattered, with nobody there to help him pick up the pieces. He prays, to his unseen creator, for the strength to continue on. From his lips, he drew the baffling hallelujah. No response. He spent his whole night trying to forget. He has been there many times before. Searching for a friend. He is small. He is needy. Lost himself again. He feels unsafe. Small. He strains for the elusive hallelujah. Whispers of past orthodoxies. A tear slides down his cheek. He is broken; falling to pieces. Hallelujah.

Replies Deviant Posted at 5:17 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Great poem Kristoffer. You write a lot eh? I still don't have the motivation to write anything. Prom3theus Posted at 5:16 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Quote: from theatreminelli at 8:15 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 I'm pretty sure the last line of the first verse is plagurised. It definitely is. It was my inspiration. RoseBeautyMagical416 Posted at 5:15 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 Amen!!!! Praise the Lord TheatreMinelli Posted at 5:15 pm on Nov. 18, 2008 I'm pretty sure the last line of the first verse is plagurised. All 4 previous replies displayed.