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bananawhore Posted at 2:20 pm on Nov. 20, 2008
Lies will wrap around my mind
Slowly smother me
No difference
The lines so blurred
Between truths and lies and realities.
Tell my anything
Forced to believe
Forced to agree
Over analyze
And take nothing with a grain of salt
The workings of my mind.
Critisizm hurled right toward me
And jokes and irony
Interperrted the wrong way.
Expected to gracefully glide away
Instead they cling and drape around me
Hide themselves beneath my skin.
Forever kept within me
Driving me past the point of hate.
Compliments thrown
Now and then
Slide quickly off my skin
Slimy and greasy
And to me so untrue.
Just Cant believe
One single good thing
Not a single thing to combat the lies
I force myself to believe.

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bananawhore Posted at 2:39 pm on Nov. 20, 2008
thanks, i'll tell her

spartan09 Posted at 2:22 pm on Nov. 20, 2008
Critizism hurled right toward me
Interpreted the wrong way.

Other then that, it looks excellent.

addicted to girls Posted at 2:21 pm on Nov. 20, 2008
cool
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