Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Which version of this poem do you prefer? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]DemolitionxXxLover[/m] at 3:45 pm on Nov. 20, 2008[quote]I like the second one better[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post bananawhore Posted at 3:31 pm on Nov. 20, 2008 version one: Somewhere far away Or not that far at all In a deep, dark, jungle Or in the center of soul The beating of a battle drum The beating of my heart Listen to the shrieks of war Or are those just my thoughts? One thought still rests in my head. Who is the enemy? For this is unclear. The enemy to be defeated Is my own self doubt and fear. version 2: Somewhere far away Or not that far at all In a deep, dark, jungle Or in the center of soul The beating of a battle drum The beating of my heart Prepare for war Who is the enemy? For this is unclear. The enemy to be defeated Is my own self doubt and fear.

Replies Written in Love Posted at 3:52 pm on Nov. 20, 2008 numero dos. DemolitionxXxLover Posted at 3:45 pm on Nov. 20, 2008 I like the second one better hersheyparker Posted at 3:38 pm on Nov. 20, 2008 first. All 3 previous replies displayed.