Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic thoughts and critizism on my poem please Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]bananawhore[/m] at 2:43 pm on Nov. 21, 2008[quote]Morning cup of coffee Warm as it gracefully zooms through one's body. Cant help but delight And wipe away the tired Cold Unhappiness But soon the feeling begins to change With a hot and bitter slash Cant help but wonder what has become of that recent smile Just add a pinch of sugar And just a drop of milk The taste will soon sweeten your senses Fickle minded breakast drink For every sip will change Don't know what it will do Send awakening caffeine senses through the body Our scald the innocent pink tongue. For life is like a cup of coffee Unexpected twists Every step Every day. But Perfect With some help along the way Just add some sugar Just stir around a smile Make life the best that it can be Treat it like Your morning coffee [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post bananawhore Posted at 2:43 pm on Nov. 21, 2008 Morning cup of coffee Warm as it gracefully zooms through one's body. Cant help but delight And wipe away the tired Cold Unhappiness But soon the feeling begins to change With a hot and bitter slash Cant help but wonder what has become of that recent smile Just add a pinch of sugar And just a drop of milk The taste will soon sweeten your senses Fickle minded breakast drink For every sip will change Don't know what it will do Send awakening caffeine senses through the body Our scald the innocent pink tongue. For life is like a cup of coffee Unexpected twists Every step Every day. But Perfect With some help along the way Just add some sugar Just stir around a smile Make life the best that it can be Treat it like Your morning coffee

Replies bordmb Posted at 2:46 pm on Nov. 21, 2008 goodness u love coffee dont you.. im sure all coffee lovers would be rivited. surfergurl Posted at 2:43 pm on Nov. 21, 2008 Maxwell All 2 previous replies displayed.