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bordmb Posted at 2:53 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
     BLIND LOVE

when I see you my heart burns
when you talk oh how it yearns
but im scared to ask for more
for I know not what's in store
will our future be as friends
will we love until the end
ill wait for you to give a sign
until then my heart is blind

  so I want your opinion .on the poem

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sebsam Posted at 8:21 am on Mar. 22, 2009
tis wickedy wooo!!! me loves it  :D Well done
Nyx28 Posted at 4:44 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
Punctuation would rock in this poem. The poem was good in concept,though it could've been written better.I still like the poem though.
xidus Posted at 2:56 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
i like it :D 100 out of 10 :)
boyluvr84 Posted at 2:54 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
what happens when ur not in love anymore?
hate poems?
fuck her poems?
stick it in ur juice box & suck it poems?

[cant wait?]

Kipzillah Posted at 2:54 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
short and sweet....two thumbs up
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