Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic What's everyone think? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]HeavenShallBurn[/m] at 7:47 pm on Nov. 23, 2008[quote]Its o.k... I gave it an 8[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Anonymous Posted at 7:46 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Such sweet beauty, it captivates me, and forever I am bound, both in heart and in soul, to feel such great affection. So gorgeous is her body, so attractive her features. I must confess that as each second does pass, so does my infatuation. My love for her grows stronger, unhindered by any force of Earth or Heaven above. And so it is that this love I feel for her, the one whom I call my closest friend, is unto itself a curse. How pitiable it is that I should fall for one who I am so close to, and yet am perpetually far from. Forever by her side yet never able to hold her in my arms. Though I know it to be a dream which shall forever remain unobtainable, my desire and longing for her affections shall not die. For eternity I am doomed to the hell of unrequited love for a friend.

Replies carracer Posted at 7:58 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 I like it, but I don't think the idea is very original. I will give it a seven. I agree with you about the free verse thing though. Rhymes set unwanted limitations. If you ever want to talk about poetry message me. :) Anonymous Posted at 7:54 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Quote: from Skyler72 at 10:49 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 I like poems that rhyme. 5/10. I can't rhyme without turning things to crap. So, free verse for the win. carracer Posted at 7:50 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Quote: from Kjanhot at 7:48 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Too long!! Wow. Not true at all. Quit complaining. Skyler72 rawrr Posted at 7:49 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 I like poems that rhyme. 5/10. Kjanhot Posted at 7:48 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Too long!! MixedDelight Posted at 7:48 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 It's pleasant. HeavenShallBurn Posted at 7:47 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Its o.k... I gave it an 8 All 7 previous replies displayed.