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wbafan2 Posted at 9:44 am on Nov. 30, 2008
The sun rises above the hillcrest,
As does the joy of my heart;
Rays of warmth and love,
From her I will never depart.

Fresh dew upon the grass,
Young birds chirp in their nests;
I watch her gently sleep,
My love to her I silently profess.

I enjoy the stillness and calm,
Watching as she smiles and dreams;
She brings me to stillness and peace,
Like that of a slow flowing stream.

My heart and soul flow with love,
And I smile as I quietly reflect;
I've been handed a sweet princess,
A sweet princess to love and to protect.

A vow to myself I make,
As she quietly sleeps away;
To love and always cherish her,
Until my last breath... until my last da

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xxSophie Posted at 10:56 am on Dec. 2, 2008
ur gf is sexy lol
MissVeganx Posted at 5:26 pm on Dec. 1, 2008
Aw, that's so very sweet! What a wonderful boyfriend you must be. :)
Acid World Posted at 12:24 pm on Nov. 30, 2008
The man never said he wrote it though did he  
Zetsuai Posted at 9:52 am on Nov. 30, 2008
Cute.
greeneyedbeauty Posted at 9:49 am on Nov. 30, 2008
Good!

And who cares if it's another author.. it's the thought that counts.

Good Luck.

Toyah Posted at 9:47 am on Nov. 30, 2008
Quote: from SpM at 5:46 pm on Nov. 30, 2008

Nothing shows love like some carefully prepared copypasta.

http://www.imaginelife.ro/other/other-for-love/reflections_of_a_beautiful_morning/


FUCK  

tuts, you bastard, she wont forgive you for using someone elses poem.

cornbaby631 Posted at 9:47 am on Nov. 30, 2008
Quote: from SpM at 9:46 am on Nov. 30, 2008

Nothing shows love like some carefully prepared copypasta.

http://www.imaginelife.ro/other/other-for-love/reflections_of_a_beautiful_morning/



Oooh burn!

SpM Posted at 9:46 am on Nov. 30, 2008
Nothing shows love like some carefully prepared copypasta.

http://www.imaginelife.ro/other/other-for-love/reflections_of_a_beautiful_morning/

abbigayle303 Posted at 9:46 am on Nov. 30, 2008
wow thats just beautiful
pelican Posted at 9:45 am on Nov. 30, 2008
very nice, but is that last word a typo?
sadnessness Posted at 9:45 am on Nov. 30, 2008
awwwww
SUPER SEXY CHICK Posted at 9:45 am on Nov. 30, 2008
awww
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