Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Witness to a murder Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]MissVeganx[/m] at 5:31 pm on Dec. 1, 2008[quote]I see thee light, You shine too brightly. Mock me by day; And taunt me nightly, Where I do go, You follow in vain; For I feel none, But sorrow and shame. Last year, or when? Time bares no meaning. All I do hear, Is distant screaming. By night; I dream Of his bloodied chest. By day; consumed The guilt, too intense. My blood runs black, Mine soul is broken. My throat pricks dry; Of words failed spoken. I hope you like it! Any comments, etc. are much appreciated.  [font=Georgia][/font] [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post MissVeganx Posted at 5:31 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 I see thee light, You shine too brightly. Mock me by day; And taunt me nightly, Where I do go, You follow in vain; For I feel none, But sorrow and shame. Last year, or when? Time bares no meaning. All I do hear, Is distant screaming. By night; I dream Of his bloodied chest. By day; consumed The guilt, too intense. My blood runs black, Mine soul is broken. My throat pricks dry; Of words failed spoken. I hope you like it! Any comments, etc. are much appreciated.

Replies MissVeganx Posted at 1:00 pm on Dec. 4, 2008 Thanks! XsmilygirlX Posted at 5:37 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 That's great MissVeganx Posted at 5:33 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 Thankyou so much :) noraa Posted at 5:33 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 I actually really love this. I usually don't see too much poetry I like on LiveWire, but this was incredible. Keep it up! Catalyst11 Posted at 5:32 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 This is really good babecakes Posted at 5:32 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 thats amazing! All 6 previous replies displayed.