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Topic I will d.e.s.t.r.o.y. you
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babycherry Posted at 9:12 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
I will d.e.s.t.r.o.y you
I
Come
   Home
AnD lOoK iN tHe MiRrOr
What do I see?
U.G.L.Y.
[Fat]
y.
 o.
   u.
     a.
       r.
         e.
           s.
             t.
               u.
                 p.
                   i.
                     d.
You are (d.i.s.g.u.s.t.i.n.g)
I tell myself
Throw_it_up
F-o-o-d is dirty
((You are dirty))
~Throw it up now~
Empty y o u r s e l f
G.
 O.
   O.
     D.
Now //bleed\\
B/l/e/e/d you ugly BiTcH
It's what you d_e_s_e_r_v_e
Cut [deeper] this time
D*e*s*t*r*o*y*Y*o*u*r*s*e*l*f
You're n.o.t.h.i.n.g
Worthless...
So [[bleed]]
Bleed F|O|R|E|V|E|R
N
 o
   w
     R
       u
         n
Get rid of that {fat}
Run f a s t e r
Run f a r t h e r
Nobody \\likes// you
Fatty
You must be b+e+t+t+e+r
You must be s^r^o^n^g^e^r
Go home now
Weigh yourself, see if you passed
...
You failed
O.n.l.y #one# pound lost
You're FAT!!!!
Do 50 push-ups
And 50 more
Now go to B E D
W
 A
   K
     E
       U
         P
//And\\
Repeat|taepeR
Because I {(Own)} you
I am ana
And I will d.e.s.t.r.o.y. you

This is a poem I just found.
I find it very interesting.
Can anyone relate to the poem???

Replies
rufoo Posted at 9:21 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
that strained my eyes a little bit..
and no i cant relate to it. Im not fat
Malachite Morning Posted at 9:16 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
That was an interesting poem. I have friends and family members who battle with eating disorders. It really is hard to watch them struggle day-after-day. =/
dropdead8883 Posted at 9:15 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
haha that was tight lol
bornonmars75 Posted at 9:15 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
so sad. tear tear
noraa Posted at 9:14 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
This wasn't a good poem, but I can relate to some of the issues in it, and the voice in it makes sense other then "I will destroy you". It's more like "You are failing, keep moving, this is the right way."
maceyface Posted at 9:14 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
nope.
Love Today Posted at 9:14 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
lol
xxbarbiexx Posted at 9:13 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
.
Amazingness99 Posted at 9:13 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
I definitely DO NOT relate to the poem.
Ju5tin Posted at 9:13 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
There goes my self-esteem.
babecakes Posted at 9:13 pm on Dec. 3, 2008
okay well this sucked.
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