Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic my gone angel poem. is it good?:) let me kno:) Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]SorryxSight[/m] at 8:09 pm on Dec. 19, 2008[quote]grammar is horrible.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post smiileyy boo Posted at 8:07 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 my gone angel god sent me an angel, who cared for me an loved me like no other then took him back. i guess there must have been a mistake. i thought it was me, but i realized it was a learning experience. to be careful who i love, to let go when it's time to let go, cause the longer you hang on the more it's goin to hurt. i hanged on for a long while. i cant help but to think if he still thinks of me. but time heals everything an everyone, even heartbroken me. an in time i will be on my way to beter livin. free of any worries, or sleepless nights only filled with tears. cause i know there's someone alot better out there for me. i cant earase

Replies smiileyy boo Posted at 8:18 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from TheLastMagister at 8:16 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from smiileyy boo at 10:15 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it!    thank you very much    i know at least someone likes it lol    :) I did say I liked it! I just said revise the grammar because it blows more than an inner city whore! whore? wtf? The Last Magister Posted at 8:16 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from smiileyy boo at 10:15 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it! thank you very much i know at least someone likes it lol :) I did say I liked it! I just said revise the grammar because it blows more than an inner city whore! smiileyy boo Posted at 8:15 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it! thank you very much i know at least someone likes it lol :) Fondziie Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it! smiileyy boo Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from SorryxSight at 8:09 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 grammar is horrible. well srry my grammer isnt perfect but im not doing an essay. hard candy Posted at 8:10 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from SorryxSight at 8:09 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 grammar is horrible. this ^ The Last Magister Posted at 8:10 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Earase? I love that word. I think you mean erase. A lot is two words I wouldn't recommend using "even heartbroken me" just because it doesn't flow well, Hanged is not a word, it's hung. I like the content, I really do, just revise a bit please, for everyone's, including your own, sake. SorryxSight Posted at 8:09 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 grammar is horrible. All 8 previous replies displayed.