Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Breaking up: Writing Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]xobeautifulgirlox[/m] at 8:59 pm on Dec. 24, 2008[quote]Quote: from [m]Xgrifgrif94X[/m] at 9:58 pm on Dec. 24, 2008[quote]This is really good[/quote] Thank you. I think part of moving on, is not having any hatred towards the other person. But to realize what went wrong, and to try to move on.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post xobeautifulgirlox Posted at 8:58 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 So its over. Its as obvious as the sun shines through day. I blame myself, for maybe getting too carried away. You told me not to give my heart to you, to prevent any pain. Yet I didn't listen to you, and the silent voice inside of me, I am to blame. The promises that you made, were not meant to be kept. I should have kept my fairy tale ending to when I slept. It was dream, a beautiful dream, but that got lost some how. Finally, I have awoken, and know its over now. I should have backed away from you a long time ago, why didn't I do so But your memory I could not erase, and I just couldn't let you go I wished for your return, and still held on to that desire. That feeling now, is what put me on fire. One that can't be put out. The damage has been done and it shows. There was the clear warning, but I chose to ignore it and my heart knows. Everything is over now, and we are going to part our ways. But no matter what, and wherever life takes us, I'll love you always. Knowing that its over, you'll still be a part of me; stupid aren't I. I guess its now time to wish you the best, and say goodbye. Be on your way to a greater life, and I hope everything goes well. Maybe later, there will be between us stories to tell. I wish you joy, happiness, and ofcouse that you find love. That you find someone that you find enough. Try to smile, be your age, and go ahed and flirt. Don't worry, you shoudln't feel guilt, or any hurt. Life has it all planned out for us. I hope your plan is better then mine. Its okay, everything is over, you will be fine. Its over now, you can start a whole new life, and forget my name. Because I am the one in all of this that should be to blame.

Replies xobeautifulgirlox Posted at 9:01 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 9:59 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 I really like it. It's well written and I like how you repeated "I am to blame" at the end and near the beginning. Thank you. Yea, I am to blame, so I feel like I should make emphasis on it twice. worddsonn Posted at 9:01 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 Very good. kaylaciara Posted at 8:59 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 Post from this position was omitted due to content violations xobeautifulgirlox Posted at 8:59 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 Quote: from Xgrifgrif94X at 9:58 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 This is really good Thank you. I think part of moving on, is not having any hatred towards the other person. But to realize what went wrong, and to try to move on. noraa Posted at 8:59 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 I really like it. It's well written and I like how you repeated "I am to blame" at the end and near the beginning. Thanantos Posted at 8:58 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 Post from this position was omitted due to content violations Xgrifgrif94X Posted at 8:58 pm on Dec. 24, 2008 This is really good All 7 previous replies displayed.