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nicolekisses Posted at 7:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Hi my name is nicole.

I wrote this poem earlier today just letting it all out and now I need an opinion on what I should do to get help. IT used to be a habbit of mine and now I'm not sure what to do. Truthly I can see myself doing this agian, evrything in the poem came straight from my heart.

I dont care what you post really I just need domeone to talk to
So heres my poem

                           blood leaks ruby red
                    It drips down my arm and falls apon my bed
      It hurts so bad, but feels so good, it creates an erie but cool mood
       It takes away the pain before, but leaves me crying on the floor
               I crave it like a drug,But what I realy need is a hug
       To take away evrything, lift me of my burden and to give me wings
               But I have tried, all they do is feed me lies
                       I would rather cut and DIE

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nicolekisses Posted at 7:23 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Thank you for takeing your time to read and comment... I'lll be sure to email some of you guy's...really and truely THANK YOU!!!  
VonGuy1 Posted at 7:17 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
hi, i'm von

i hope you don't do that again, cut yourself

if you want to talk you can message me anytime

by the way, you're a good writer

In Our Eyes Posted at 7:17 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
It seems more prose than poem, and it's halfway decent x-D
gnr90 Posted at 7:17 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
This isn't a bad start to writing. And writing is definitely better than cutting. If you find this as a good way to let your feelings out, feel free to continue. Anything that you can do to keep you from hurting your self is a really good thing. I'm willing to listen if you want, you can PM me.
chaosdisown Posted at 7:16 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
it came straight from your heart? do you know what a heart is missy?
W o n d e r l a n d Posted at 7:16 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Welcome to LW

plumc0la Posted at 7:16 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
I understand. I'm a former cutter. Just pull through and don't let it get you again. I did it once in 8th grade, and then relapsed earlier this year. I quit now, but not a day goes by when I don't want to do it. Even on good days. It's unexplainable, but true.

Just pull through and don't let yourself get sucked into it again.

SkAnDyBaR Posted at 7:16 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Cool it's Cool.
surfrgrl Posted at 7:16 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
ehmagod. that was amazing.
beautifoul Posted at 7:15 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
you should add this to the end of your poem
'and eat pie'
nicolekisses Posted at 7:15 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Thanks ( nicole giggles a little and her mood is lightnd)
Xgrifgrif94X Posted at 7:14 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Thats good
carracer Posted at 7:14 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
I would tell someone and if it really is an uncontrollable urge, get a psychologist.
jennamae1988 Posted at 7:14 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Keep on writing poems.  It will help get your emotions out in a healthy manner instead of cutting.
Lihiro Posted at 7:14 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Hi there, nice to meet you.

Your poem sucks as a poem.

But as an expressive art it could be considered worthy to many emotional kids internationally.

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