Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic my new story i dont have a title Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]Miss Vanity[/m] at 8:12 pm on Dec. 26, 2008[quote]You should make it more descriptive.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post coughcough Posted at 8:11 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 she bit her lip as he pushed harder on her she opened her mouth to scream but nothing came out. He pushed down harder on her she tried to push him away but she wasnt strong enough to push him away.   Finaly he was gone she got up and walked back into the party her friend brought her to, She took out her cell and dialed 911 the sirens sounded and every one ran and stared at her. now she was alone, cold and scared. this is what i have so far idk what do u think?

Replies naturechild Posted at 8:25 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 sounds like a rip off of speak. the book? yeah it's been done before. start something not so...depressing. happy stories! StopXXwatch Posted at 8:17 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 Wow that wasn't very vivid at all. I couldn't apint a picture. I'mno JK but hell you gotta workharder than that! I wanna be a writer myself. And how about  The Defamation of Innocence. XOallixs0n Posted at 8:15 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 why the FUCK would you post that? In Our Eyes Posted at 8:14 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 Will there be a second book? jacobs Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 you said push too many times. find other words. ToodleWoodles Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 umm yeah, im gonna leave this topic now. Half ton hero Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 Thats it? lame. whips handcuffs Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 that's a story? drowningfish Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 that should be like a PSA dangers of partying or somehting like thhat xwhylovewhyhatex Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 A bit short for a story. beautifoul Posted at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 police came pretty quick. Miss Vanity Posted at 8:12 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 You should make it more descriptive. mrsgabbysmall Posted at 8:12 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 um, how 'bout RAPE? MystiqueBeauty16 Posted at 8:12 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 That's not cool. At all. All 14 previous replies displayed.