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Mikayla007 Posted at 11:56 am on Dec. 29, 2008
Hero

I bleed for you
I cry for you
I know you need me
I need you too
My life is useless unless it can be used to protect you
The strawberry gashes across my chest are nothing....
They are nothing for your tears hurt me more than the deepest slash
You help me fight the battle, yet you are never in the front lines
But in the front of my mind always
If I die here, you will die to
God, I'm not done here, I will never leave you
In our solemn hour you relax me
Your kisses revitalize me
Your touch, I swear it heals
With you I can take on life, the hand it deals
I surly would flee with you
But the oath makes me stay
Still I'll be your warrior until my end
But run love, run
I cannot hold back the storm forever, my old self wants to break free
God, please hold my hand
Beg me to stay with me, for I cannot leave you
I am your hero

Here is another peom, they are simiallr I admit but they were written durning a sad time durnig my life

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adriannaa Posted at 12:01 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Both of them have given me chills, I needed that feeling.
moviecritic99 Posted at 11:59 am on Dec. 29, 2008
I like it...very deep.
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