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Topic A Piece Of Heaven On Earth
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amber1991 Posted at 12:18 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
She was his heaven on earth
and when she was gone
he thought he wouldn't survive
he gave up everything he loved
he became a ghost on earth
she was his angel and without her he couldn't function
she never knew how he really felt about her
or how important she was to him
but she was always there for him
no matter what it cost
always a phone call away
no matter about the time
so when she died
he was right there by her side
and it was the best and worst moment of his life
his angel was gone from earth in a minute
but he got to see her go back where she belonged.

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grinzbie Posted at 12:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
sad....
Miss Vanity Posted at 12:22 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Sounds too depressing.
SpM Posted at 12:19 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Spam is bad enough in itself, but your poems are vomit inducing. Shut the fuck up.
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