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Topic I found an old poem of mine....
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Anonymous Posted at 9:27 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
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mvmassacre Posted at 9:33 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I like it.

It's really good!

Anonymous Posted at 9:32 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.

Thanks for the advice captain obvious.

I said it was an old poem I found.
I usually hate writing love poetry because I think that it is artificial.

I usually write about various things.

Soccerchik107 Posted at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I really liked that =)
Anonymous Posted at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Quote: from alastrxxna at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.

That's another reason I am surprised that I wrote it.
Because I don't actual believe that it is central to lust and intimacy.


noraa Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.
alastrxxna Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.
Anonymous Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Quote: from Anonymous Chris at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.

I think that I meat difficult to be used correctly.

Total Destruction Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
That sounds so similar to something I would right and I enjoyed it quite a bit.
JeanClaude Posted at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
All you need is love
Anonymous Chris Posted at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.
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