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mvmassacre
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Posted at 9:33 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
| I like it. It's really good! |
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Anonymous
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Posted at 9:32 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.
Thanks for the advice captain obvious. I said it was an old poem I found. I usually hate writing love poetry because I think that it is artificial. I usually write about various things. |
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Soccerchik107
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Posted at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
| I really liked that =) |
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Anonymous
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Posted at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
Quote: from alastrxxna at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.
That's another reason I am surprised that I wrote it. Because I don't actual believe that it is central to lust and intimacy. |
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noraa
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Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
| Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table. |
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alastrxxna
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Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
| Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests. |
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Anonymous
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Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
Quote: from Anonymous Chris at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.
I think that I meat difficult to be used correctly. |
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Total Destruction
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Posted at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
| That sounds so similar to something I would right and I enjoyed it quite a bit. |
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JeanClaude
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Posted at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
| All you need is love |
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Anonymous Chris
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Posted at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 |
| I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly. |
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