It's really good!
Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.
Thanks for the advice captain obvious.
I said it was an old poem I found. I usually hate writing love poetry because I think that it is artificial.
I usually write about various things.
Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.
That's another reason I am surprised that I wrote it. Because I don't actual believe that it is central to lust and intimacy.
I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.
I think that I meat difficult to be used correctly.