Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic My first poem in ages! Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]gapperdan[/m] at 6:44 am on Dec. 30, 2008[quote]OK, so I haven't written any poetry for over 2 years now... and sat down earlier on and wrote this. I know it's not the best... but... comments? [b]Who Is Me?[/b] Come and see what I can. When you are here, in this exact spot, You can see and hear all that I can. Your experiences may be like those I have, Yet you and I are not the same. These are the words I tell my future self, The person that I will become. Even if he were to travel on a time machine, Back to the Then that is Right Now, I am not my future self, and he is not me. We may have continuously shared The same time-space since forever, But the two of us are not the same. I will become you, but I am not you, You were once me, but you are me no longer. [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post gapperdan Posted at 6:44 am on Dec. 30, 2008 OK, so I haven't written any poetry for over 2 years now... and sat down earlier on and wrote this. I know it's not the best... but... comments? Who Is Me? Come and see what I can. When you are here, in this exact spot, You can see and hear all that I can. Your experiences may be like those I have, Yet you and I are not the same. These are the words I tell my future self, The person that I will become. Even if he were to travel on a time machine, Back to the Then that is Right Now, I am not my future self, and he is not me. We may have continuously shared The same time-space since forever, But the two of us are not the same. I will become you, but I am not you, You were once me, but you are me no longer.

Replies blacksash7022 Posted at 7:03 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Not bad I kind of like the approximate rhyme gapperdan Posted at 6:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Cheers guys! I know it's a bit philosophical and deep... but it was the first thing that came into my head. Imbetter Posted at 6:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008 I like it. katbabes Posted at 6:47 am on Dec. 30, 2008 thats good :) Miss Vanity Posted at 6:45 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Pretty good All 5 previous replies displayed.