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amber1991 Posted at 11:03 am on Dec. 30, 2008
She sits there in a corner
blocked off from the world
she dies on the inside
with thoughts clouding her mind
she's seconds away from grabbing the blade
but an unknown force is stopping her
she doesn't know how much longer she can take it
being isolated from everything
but it's her own fault that she's in this position
she's scared to come out
because of what people might think and she'll get hurt
so she dies and dies and dies
and dies until she's not existing

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acausedelle Posted at 11:06 am on Dec. 30, 2008
EMO!
scorpiona Posted at 11:06 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Quote: from amber1991 at 11:03 am on Dec. 30, 2008

She sits there in a corner
blocked off from the world
she dies on the inside
with thoughts clouding her mind
she's seconds away from grabbing the blade
but an unknown force is stopping her
she doesn't know how much longer she can take it
being isolated from everything
but it's her own fault that she's in this position
she's scared to come out
because of what people might think and she'll get hurt
so she dies and dies and dies ,did we met once ,coz i feel your talking about my shity lif e,its very good ,keep up the great blue work i loved it ,and i dont love thing that easy
and dies until she's not existing

amber1991 Posted at 11:05 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Quote: from daydreamer13 at 11:04 am on Dec. 30, 2008

r u emo or depressed or something?

You haven't read my other poems obviously...

BabiiTempa Posted at 11:05 am on Dec. 30, 2008
hmm thats nice
daydreamer13 Posted at 11:04 am on Dec. 30, 2008
r u emo or depressed or something?
namefake3 Posted at 11:04 am on Dec. 30, 2008
YAYYYY
rockstar43 Posted at 11:04 am on Dec. 30, 2008
ooookkkkkkkkkkkk

Miss Vanity Posted at 11:03 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Depressing
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