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tragic romance Posted at 4:20 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Burning on the inside
Bones lie crushed in a pile of dust
Make a wish...!

Acid in my throat, Damns right it makes me choke
A vision clouded only by the smoke
Emanating off of burning flesh
A vision blurred only by the these tears unshed
Thoughts running rampant
Voices in my head
A whisper pierces the loud silence
Seven letters that couldn't lie
Not like "forever", they promise goodbye
And here I though the answer lye in a word four letters long
Lest I speak now?
This shouldn't be the first time, I was wrong!
"suicide", "suicide", "suicide" the voices cry!
Blade in hand to do all that I can
Paper cuts and rust lined scars
But nothing of worthy impact
One word stronger than suicide is burning relentlessly  
A hole in what is left of my heart
So gravity you are no longer of use
Because I'm bound here by a promise
The keeper of my noose.

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Natsy Posted at 4:25 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
xxpsychoxx285xx Posted at 4:24 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
i kinda like it
DemolitionxXxLover Posted at 4:24 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Quote: from catoman at 7:22 pm on Jan. 1, 2009

what is a "noose" you can;t understand the title you can't understand the work

The rope you hang some one by
Littlestoxie Posted at 4:23 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Quote: from catoman at 7:22 pm on Jan. 1, 2009

what is a "noose" you can;t understand the title you can't understand the work

a noose is a type of knot in a rope that a lot of people use to hang themselves.
catoman Posted at 4:22 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
what is a "noose" you can;t understand the title you can't understand the work
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