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tragic romance Posted at 4:36 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Welcome to the black parade,  
This razor blade masquerade,  
Keep a woman dangling from a string until you are certain you've another hooked,  
And for all of this, I hope your line breaks!  
 
Wanting so desperately someone in my life,  
But so fearful to make it for all of the wrong reasons,  
Knowing I couldn't stand to put someone through that.  
 
"Wait until you're older, relationships are just fun and games when you're young"  
And what does that say for all of you?  
For the woman signing her divorce papers in her wedding gown?  
 
The truth is we all have hearts, to love and to hurt.  
Men do to women, what women do to men.  
What's a teenage love affair holds truth throughout life.  
Commitment dances in a lover's eyes, a mockery, a mischievous smile.

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Miss Vanity Posted at 4:42 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Not bad.
Rebecca1422 Posted at 4:41 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
sorry (sp.) *seams
h a t t Posted at 4:40 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
seams.

and not bad.

tragic romance Posted at 4:39 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Quote: from Lord Cat at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009

Whatever ,your poem...is kinda childish...

It was spur of the moment when I was pissed at my dad. My other poems seem to be too much for others to handle. I can't win.

dramaqueenxoxo Posted at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Very, um, commercial
Lord Cat Posted at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Whatever ,your poem...is kinda childish...
acausedelle Posted at 4:38 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Uhhh no.
glowinthedark Posted at 4:37 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
I thought this was regarding the song All These Things I Hate by Bullet For My Valentine.

xBeautifulTragedyx Posted at 4:37 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
Well that's fun.
JeanClaude Posted at 4:37 pm on Jan. 1, 2009
You're gonna be a STAR
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