Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic How is this poem? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]danndivision[/m] at 12:45 pm on Jan. 2, 2009[quote]One day, every day is how it always seemed every moment i saw her her eyes always seemed to gleam I love seeing her even if we don't talk I just stand there doing nothing while the walls seem to gawk felt bored and felt like writing a poem, is it decent? if not how can I change it?[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post danndivision Posted at 12:45 pm on Jan. 2, 2009 One day, every day is how it always seemed every moment i saw her her eyes always seemed to gleam I love seeing her even if we don't talk I just stand there doing nothing while the walls seem to gawk felt bored and felt like writing a poem, is it decent? if not how can I change it?

Replies danndivision Posted at 11:37 am on Jan. 3, 2009 I guess,,, i just dont knwo what else to add to it ixcantxspellxsry Posted at 11:34 am on Jan. 3, 2009 I liked it but it kinda didn't seem finished like i think shes radiant beyond comapre but thats it it kinda just stops. All 2 previous replies displayed.