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bongbuddy Posted at 4:47 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
i admit its not the best but after 2 1/2 weeks of writers block its a beautiful sight

to the love of my life
i give my heart
just take the hate away
and we shall never part

please take my soul as payment
for all the love you give me
because not everyone can say
yeah i love her and she set me free

on every flower i find
i see the beauty of your face
when i look at the stars
i see your eyes twinkle in space

please show me the way
to see every day
as if it were new
hold me close
and never let go
i love you
and just wanted you to know

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Fouad Posted at 4:58 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
Quote: from Heart92 at 3:51 am on Jan. 3, 2009

Well written.

^
Heart92 Posted at 4:51 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
Well written.
beachgirl101 Posted at 4:49 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
That's really sweet. I hate writer's block to. Want to know how I overcome it? I read a really good book, and that eventually is enough to spark that fire again.
TBMP Posted at 4:48 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
oh man, i know how u feel about the writers block
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