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Mikayla007 Posted at 6:41 pm on Jan. 5, 2009
Mother Earth

In the centre of the Earth a goddess did sleep
Mother Earth
Now she has awakened woe to her for she has cause to weep
Mother Earth
The world of birds and butterflies under grey skies
Man thought they could control her all lies
She goes her own way
The world has turned for the worst sad to say
She watches from the mountains as humans desecrate her world
This is the way man continues to live
In the centre of the Earth a goddess did sleep
Mother Earth
Now she has awakened woe to her for she has cause to weep
Poor Mother Earth

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HiggledyPiggledy Posted at 6:31 pm on Jan. 8, 2009
Quote: from Mikayla007 at 2:41 am on Jan. 6, 2009

Mother Earth  

In the centre of the Earth a goddess did sleep
Mother Earth
Now she has awakened woe to her for she has cause to weep
Mother Earth
The world of birds and butterflies under grey skies
Man thought they could control her all lies
She goes her own way
The world has turned for the worst sad to say
She watches from the mountains as humans desecrate her world
This is the way man continues to live  
In the centre of the Earth a goddess did sleep
Mother Earth
Now she has awakened woe to her for she has cause to weep
 Poor Mother Earth

 


This reminds me of a picture I have, of Mother Earth. You depicted it very well, movingly so. It's cool.

Mikayla007 Posted at 7:06 pm on Jan. 5, 2009
Note: I wrote this peom and was inspired by the song mother earth by within temptatin. I'm not a "hippie" or "tree hugger" as anyone might claim, I like nature though, but this wasn't made to start agruments
Deagle1212 Posted at 6:42 pm on Jan. 5, 2009
we are humans the destroyer of planets
PROgoth121 Posted at 6:42 pm on Jan. 5, 2009
Quote: from TruexZero at 6:41 pm on Jan. 5, 2009

Gtfo, hippie.

Before you assume anything, I am not a hippie, but if we didn't have enough hippies then our Earth would be destroyed sooner by assholes like you.

Be energy-efficient for once.

filliam Posted at 6:41 pm on Jan. 5, 2009
poor mother earth indeed
TruexZero Posted at 6:41 pm on Jan. 5, 2009
Gtfo, hippie.
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