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amber1991 Posted at 10:34 am on Jan. 6, 2009
Okay here goes, it's not finished but I'd appreciate it if I got some advice on it.

Help me to lay it down at your feet

all my sorrows and tears and incompletes

help me to find the light

don't let me go, please hold on tight

let me know that I need you

show me all there's for me to do

and if I temporary stray away

please teach me your perfect way

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