Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic A poem I worte Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]XxRedneckBitchxX[/m] at 3:43 pm on July 6, 2009[quote]Its alright, the rhyme and flow seems forced in parts. But its really good none-the-less.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post xXxkatiekaitlynxXx Posted at 3:42 pm on July 6, 2009 As life fills my soul, It's also cold. As I feel the winds of pain Pierce into my soul. As for my lover, Life is just a cover, Covering the pain when thy is apart. For thy wish not to depart. But we will recover. You see, That thy lover, Holds a key, The key to what was once pure. Now he is my cure. And before you know the meaning of this key, We shall be rejoicing by the sea. For love is just a mystery to uncover But it is also more to discover. As we weep into the night, Moaning for watch others sight, Knowing what we will fight, We shall what life abroad. Though we know we shall sod. But we know the cost,Some may think its not worth the while, As we walk by and smile, For we know they are lost, Lost in the troubles of the world, That today we solemnly stick a sword through. But we shall when, I can smell the victory blowing in the wind. As if God's mercy is within. And though may say its worth it in the end That is not my story to send Because in this fairy tail, Our story will never end, Nor shall the love fail. So may I say, A promise that will pay Even though there isn't enough to say. I shall love you beyond death do thy part, For we shall never depart. I know its cheesy..I wrote it a good while back..just want input

Replies Here for the lulz Posted at 10:36 am on July 7, 2009 seems kinda choppy. But I really like the concept xXxkatiekaitlynxXx Posted at 3:45 pm on July 6, 2009 Quote: from MystiqueBeauty16 at 10:03 pm on Jan. 16, 2009 Quote: from CarolineLouise at 11:02 pm on Jan. 16, 2009 Quote: from MystiqueBeauty16 at 10:01 pm on Jan. 16, 2009 Quote: from CarolineLouise at 10:59 pm on Jan. 16, 2009 Quote: from MystiqueBeauty16 at 9:58 pm on Jan. 16, 2009 Do we know your selection of movies? No.       I said i have no clue what move to watch       so how could i narrow down a selection   You can't have access to all the movies in the world, I'm pretty sure.    Nope    but if i don't have a movie someone suggests, i'll just look at another suggestion Ah. In that case, Stepbrothers. Good pick it's sitting next to me on my window sill xXxkatiekaitlynxXx Posted at 3:45 pm on July 6, 2009 thanks.its really old..wrote it when i was 11 or 12.just kept it for a while bawx II Posted at 3:44 pm on July 6, 2009 That's funny, I just googled that and it came up on various sites. XxRedneckBitchxX Posted at 3:43 pm on July 6, 2009 Its alright, the rhyme and flow seems forced in parts. But its really good none-the-less. ifyoulikepinacoladas Posted at 3:43 pm on July 6, 2009 I'm sorry. All 6 previous replies displayed.