Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic my new poem Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]Areola[/m] at 6:34 pm on July 9, 2009[quote]Quote: from [m]belizabeth[/m] at 9:33 pm on July 9, 2009[quote]So what this poem may suck but I have others that are ten times better.[/quote] Good! :biggrin: [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post belizabeth Posted at 6:30 pm on July 9, 2009 Still here Waiting here Maybe forever Never going to give up Nor stop Loving you You are the one I love I care about The one who Makes the sky seem there Makes the world stand still Makes my heart beat Like never before You are the one I am waiting for. what do you think? Is it deep? does it make sense?

Replies belizabeth Posted at 8:35 am on July 11, 2009 Quote: from Prankster28 at 3:26 am on July 11, 2009 I like it. Thanks.   Prankster28 Posted at 3:26 am on July 11, 2009 I like it. belizabeth Posted at 12:20 pm on July 10, 2009 Quote: from Roger25 at 10:19 pm on July 9, 2009 I like it, describes the feeling of love. It is deep and passionate. However it is short which is okay. There are many short poems! Of course it makes sense. The message is quiet clear. A person is waiting for love. Sometimes it is time to move on. Anyways well done. Improve yourself, relax take your time and enjoy your life. =) -Denis R. Thanks. Roger25 Posted at 10:19 pm on July 9, 2009 I like it, describes the feeling of love.  It is deep and passionate.  However it is short which is okay.  There are many short poems!  Of course it makes sense.  The message is quiet clear. A person is waiting for love.  Sometimes it is time to move on. Anyways well done.  Improve yourself, relax take your time and enjoy your life. =) -Denis R. belizabeth Posted at 6:37 pm on July 9, 2009 ok.... jsia Posted at 6:36 pm on July 9, 2009 So show 'em to us. Areola Posted at 6:34 pm on July 9, 2009 Quote: from belizabeth at 9:33 pm on July 9, 2009 So what this poem may suck but I have others that are ten times better. Good! belizabeth Posted at 6:33 pm on July 9, 2009 So what this poem may suck but I have others that are ten times better. Areola Posted at 6:31 pm on July 9, 2009 Do you plan on making writing your career? If so, DON'T. All 9 previous replies displayed.