Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic My poem.. what do you guys think? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]feeltheshane[/m] at 10:05 pm on June 16, 2012[quote]didn't you post this already[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post mal3diction amoureux Posted at 10:01 pm on June 16, 2012 So you want to hear the truth? Told in a rich throaty voice. Breathy, uninhibited, woman. Making you beg for more. Love fucking lust. Smooth and sweet; Like hot fudge. Licking your fingers of my taste. Dipping and begging for more. Begging for me. Confusion. Passion, strong sexual desire Powerful. Compelling. hate? Love? Lust? Raw. Deep. Longing. Emotion. I am primitive when it comes to love. Naive, but my eyes never stop wondering. My heart never stops yearning. and I reach to you. But it isn't you that I see. Infact, your love is like honey. Thick and undesirably sweet. It chokes me when I try to breathe. Get away! Get away! I want to scream. But lonliness always wins. and I'll hold you close anyways.

Replies Jaguar Posted at 9:56 am on July 5, 2012 I like it. Last word should be 'anyway'. Silence isnt golden Posted at 7:06 am on June 17, 2012 good TragicPerfection Posted at 10:52 pm on June 16, 2012 It's okay. A few lines didn't flow evenly. But none the less well enough. liarble2014 Posted at 10:50 pm on June 16, 2012 youll see this in a movie n every word said worth millions and none what so ever will go to u :) mal3diction amoureux Posted at 10:10 pm on June 16, 2012 Quote: from feeltheshane at 12:05 am on June 17, 2012 didn't you post this already I posted a different one. feeltheshane Posted at 10:05 pm on June 16, 2012 didn't you post this already voices of silence Posted at 10:05 pm on June 16, 2012 interesting All 7 previous replies displayed.