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ImOneOfAKind Posted at 7:44 am on April 14, 2008
everything was perfect.

You showed me love,effection and alot of respect.

then one night he nocked on my door.

came inside and said ' i cant do this nomore'

i was confused, and asked ' i thought i was the one you use to love and adore?'

he looked down and said ' things just arn't they way it was before'

he left as i cried and not knowing what to say.

i thought he was going to be the one, i did not know things would end this way.

as i layed in bed that night.

cried my eyes out and held my teddy tight.

i rremembered the first time he said ' i love you'

i was so happy and said 'i love you too'

stupidly thinking our love was real and so true.

never knowing he could make me feel so blue.

     

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ImOneOfAKind Posted at 7:44 am on April 14, 2008
everything was perfect.

You showed me love,effection and alot of respect.

then one night he nocked on my door.

came inside and said ' i cant do this nomore'

i was confused, and asked ' i thought i was the one you use to love and adore?'

he looked down and said ' things just arn't they way it was before'

he left as i cried and not knowing what to say.

i thought he was going to be the one, i did not know things would end this way.

as i layed in bed that night.

cried my eyes out and held my teddy tight.

i rremembered the first time he said ' i love you'

i was so happy and said 'i love you too'

stupidly thinking our love was real and so true.

never knowing he could make me feel so blue.

     

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