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ElephantStone
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Posted at 12:57 pm on Aug. 17, 2008 |
| Ok well I did abit of work like you said and here it is revised: So, how is it? |
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ManicD
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Posted at 9:56 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
Quote: from ElephantStone at 3:02 pm on Aug. 17, 2008
Quote: from ManicD at 2:30 pm on Aug. 17, 2008
Ok, you need to reorder the list Vital details - name age etc List of your personal skills, - Preferably Tailored to the job your applying for. Education Univertsity Certs A/As level cert's GCSE's Work Exp - Write what skills you gained and how you contributed to the companies on each Referees Achievements Hobbies and outside interests - write as paragraph rather than list 
Ok Ill do that right away. Thanks a lot. But other than that, i there anything wrong with it thats in it? Is it poor or good? 
seems good, also for the future, once you have a a job which you held full time for over a year move the work ex and referees above the education and qualifications |
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ElephantStone
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Posted at 7:02 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
Quote: from ManicD at 2:30 pm on Aug. 17, 2008
Ok, you need to reorder the list Vital details - name age etc List of your personal skills, - Preferably Tailored to the job your applying for. Education Univertsity Certs A/As level cert's GCSE's Work Exp - Write what skills you gained and how you contributed to the companies on each Referees Achievements Hobbies and outside interests - write as paragraph rather than list 
Ok Ill do that right away. Thanks a lot. But other than that, i there anything wrong with it thats in it? Is it poor or good? |
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ManicD
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Posted at 6:30 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
| Ok, you need to reorder the list Vital details - name age etc List of your personal skills, - Preferably Tailored to the job your applying for. Education Univertsity Certs A/As level cert's GCSE's Work Exp - Write what skills you gained and how you contributed to the companies on each Referees Achievements Hobbies and outside interests - write as paragraph rather than list |
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Link01
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Posted at 6:16 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
| voluntary work |
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ElephantStone
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Posted at 6:14 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
Quote: from katyduck at 2:11 pm on Aug. 17, 2008
A skills and attributes section is always good. It's also best to talk about what you have to offer to the employer, and why you want to work for their company. As for strength, I wouldn't say it's that great simply because of your lack of experience in a job. The only commercial/retail experience you have is three months in a newsagents, and employers will look at that and think, "he's only ever stayed at a job for three months, what's there to say that he will hang around and work hard for us?" 
How would you write a skills and attributes section. Ive been at school until april so I havent had much oppurtuinity to work, so is it really that bad? |
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ElephantStone
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Posted at 6:11 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
Quote: from Link01 at 2:09 pm on Aug. 17, 2008
GSCE grades if you sat them age etc 
My junior certificate is the GCSEs and all my personal details I havent included for obvious reasons |
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katyduck
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Posted at 6:11 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
| A skills and attributes section is always good. It's also best to talk about what you have to offer to the employer, and why you want to work for their company. As for strength, I wouldn't say it's that great simply because of your lack of experience in a job. The only commercial/retail experience you have is three months in a newsagents, and employers will look at that and think, "he's only ever stayed at a job for three months, what's there to say that he will hang around and work hard for us?" |
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Link01
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Posted at 6:09 am on Aug. 17, 2008 |
| GSCE grades if you sat them age etc |
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