Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic i've started writing again...what do you think? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]ezacxveronica22[/m] at 6:19 am on Aug. 4, 2008[quote]Underneath underneath that smile lies a broken heart, that is tired...so tired of being ripped apart Underneath the laughter, lies hurt and pain, the kind that time cannot heal or tame. Underneath the strenght you see lies fear embedded in the kinda you grasp tightly and find hard to set free. Underneath that grown body, there is a small child still struggling to be a man not sure of where to go or who to be. underneath the harshness, lies a warm loving heart, wanting so much to be loved and not left behind. ii want you to be you let it out let it show for the whole world to see release your your fears your broken dreams bottled anxieties, and all of your hidden tear. (zac) so tell me what you thing hate it or love it or even relate to it.......[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post ezacxveronica22 Posted at 6:19 am on Aug. 4, 2008 Underneath underneath that smile lies a broken heart, that is tired...so tired of being ripped apart Underneath the laughter, lies hurt and pain, the kind that time cannot heal or tame. Underneath the strenght you see lies fear embedded in the kinda you grasp tightly and find hard to set free. Underneath that grown body, there is a small child still struggling to be a man not sure of where to go or who to be. underneath the harshness, lies a warm loving heart, wanting so much to be loved and not left behind. ii want you to be you let it out let it show for the whole world to see release your your fears your broken dreams bottled anxieties, and all of your hidden tear. (zac) so tell me what you thing hate it or love it or even relate to it.......

Replies its only me again Posted at 6:42 am on Aug. 4, 2008 very good SUPER SEXY CHICK Posted at 6:25 am on Aug. 4, 2008 i like it Dragonfang93 Posted at 6:24 am on Aug. 4, 2008 That was beautiful. dragonking Posted at 6:22 am on Aug. 4, 2008 It's pretty good.  It's spelled strength.  One part seemed to not sound correct so you should reword it. Underneath the strenght you see lies fear embedded in the kinda you grasp tightly and find hard to set free. motorhead113 Posted at 6:22 am on Aug. 4, 2008 I like it. 'Tis deep, and reminds me of a friend. SavannahNoel Posted at 6:21 am on Aug. 4, 2008 I like it :) Distance is Darkness Posted at 6:21 am on Aug. 4, 2008 LOVE eeeet Eos Posted at 6:21 am on Aug. 4, 2008 Deep man. Deep. *nods* All 8 previous replies displayed.