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bordmb Posted at 9:33 pm on Jan. 6, 2009
This is my poem entitled blind love. It is an original piece of mine and I would like to know what you, the people of livewire think about it.

Blind Love

When I see you my heart burns

when you talk oh how I yearn

but I am scared to ask for more

for I know not wht's in store

will our future be as friends

will we love until the end

I'll wait for you to give a sign

you always make my heart blind

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sammiroo Posted at 9:36 pm on Jan. 6, 2009
It wouldn't make it into my school literary magazine, I know that much.