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oranga88 Posted at 4:35 am on Mar. 30, 2009
I seen earlier some guy posted his poem so I thought i'd show yous mine ;)

Any Irish people reading this let me know :D

Lads & larger ladies and legs
I caught you in the corner
WKD and cheap fags

We got to talken which quickley led to more
a saucey wee kiss ended up on your bedroom floor :L

The light breaks through the window in your
skanky 1 bedroom flat
The beer goggles have worn off just realizing what
I was at

I'am sneaking out your front door theres a taxi stand
just up the street

These sunday morning get aways is a feeling
ye just can't beat :L

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OkayKelsey Posted at 6:25 am on Mar. 30, 2009
i have Irish in me
Deadman15 Posted at 5:30 am on Mar. 30, 2009
i'm irish butt uhh dont talk like that thooo. lol
TheatreMinelli Posted at 5:23 am on Mar. 30, 2009
Quote: from oranga88 at 12:40 pm on Mar. 30, 2009

Thanks :D I always write depression stuff but starting to write funny teenage material now :D

No its just a school kid rhyme

Neuyasha Posted at 4:53 am on Mar. 30, 2009
Nice poem i liked it. It would of been better on Saint Patrick's day maybe? :]]]
The Persuader Posted at 4:50 am on Mar. 30, 2009
I'm not irish but I thought it was cool.
oranga88 Posted at 4:40 am on Mar. 30, 2009
Thanks :D I always write depression stuff but starting to write funny teenage material now :D
reloaded Posted at 4:38 am on Mar. 30, 2009
i love it :D
oranga88 Posted at 4:38 am on Mar. 30, 2009
Quote: from theatreminelli at 4:37 am on Mar. 30, 2009

I've got a better one from where I am from

We are the Geordie Girls
We wear our hair in curls
we wear our dungerees to show our sexy knees
The dirty boy next door
he put me on the floor
he kissed me twenty times and then he asked for more.



Lol thats funny :D

Did you write that lol?

oranga88 Posted at 4:37 am on Mar. 30, 2009
Sweet :D

Wat do yous think?

TheatreMinelli Posted at 4:37 am on Mar. 30, 2009
I've got a better one from where I am from

We are the Geordie Girls
We wear our hair in curls
we wear our dungerees to show our sexy knees
The dirty boy next door
he put me on the floor
he kissed me twenty times and then he asked for more.

Live Just To Die Posted at 4:36 am on Mar. 30, 2009
Haha. Nice.
lisababyyy Posted at 4:36 am on Mar. 30, 2009
i'm irish
reloaded Posted at 4:36 am on Mar. 30, 2009
Irish <3
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