Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Crtique please Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]hadouken[/m] at 9:15 am on Aug. 20, 2008[quote]yea, i agree, the contrast is a bit off, but this is still pretty cool[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post starrynight401 Posted at 9:14 am on Aug. 20, 2008 Some suggestions please? And critiques. The one area that really bothers me is the white set of little flowers they aren't quite burned in enough they are too stark white... Hummingbird moth

Replies starrynight401 Posted at 9:36 am on Aug. 20, 2008 Quote: from tropicalbreezze2 at 9:19 am on Aug. 20, 2008 try using a macro lense Oh I wish I just can't afford one just yet. tennisplayerV2 Posted at 9:28 am on Aug. 20, 2008 awesome psychotickid555 Posted at 9:26 am on Aug. 20, 2008 crop the white photos out. they look like there was a fluffy on your lens starrynight401 Posted at 9:19 am on Aug. 20, 2008 It's a canon film slr and yeah the the hummingbird moth became blurry because I didn't have the speed high enough because I just caught him before he flew away so I didn't have time to adjust my settings. tropicalbreezze2 Posted at 9:19 am on Aug. 20, 2008 try using a macro lense The Fantasy Posted at 9:18 am on Aug. 20, 2008 Its good, but more sharpness. piertangent Posted at 9:17 am on Aug. 20, 2008 What camera are you using? RockerTori106 Posted at 9:17 am on Aug. 20, 2008 It should be sharper, I think. tropicalbreezze2 Posted at 9:16 am on Aug. 20, 2008 I'm a photographer too :) Umm I like the whole concept and the fact that you caught a hummingbird is amazing! But I think that they humming bird is a little blurry and out of focus even though he is supposed to be the focal point and centerpiece of the picture. Also I agree with your own critique that the white flowers at the top are too stark white Alabamarama Posted at 9:16 am on Aug. 20, 2008 It's nice, but it's not really sharp, even in the foreground. hadouken Posted at 9:15 am on Aug. 20, 2008 yea, i agree, the contrast is a bit off, but this is still pretty cool All 11 previous replies displayed.