Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Need Some Constructive Criticism Please! Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]shen10200[/m] at 9:33 am on Sep. 18, 2008[quote]oh i like it[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post pinch Posted at 9:30 am on Sep. 18, 2008 I've been drawing all summer and uploading them to deviantart. I've definitely improved and since I've moved onto digitally colouring (using PhotoShop) my portraits. http://odist.deviantart.com/art/Nina-97842260 She's my latest, and I think she's my best so far, but there are a few things I've noticed I need to fix like her hair, for example. Can someone give me some more constructive crit? but also please tell me what you think is good, eh? lol Many thanks - I'll be back in a few hours so apologies if I don't reply for ages.

Replies pinch Posted at 2:28 am on Sep. 19, 2008 Oooh! thanks you guys :) *and saves proportion guide image* I knew her chin/cheeks were too fat but I couldn't adjust them very easily >_> Thanks for your comments, they've been really helpful :) SimShrimp Posted at 2:27 pm on Sep. 18, 2008 Her mouth is uneven, but otherwise, its really good! yayyyy for deviantart. :) melroy Posted at 9:52 am on Sep. 18, 2008 i think its really good Lulu Nobody Posted at 9:50 am on Sep. 18, 2008 Her jaw definitely seems big, or at least her chin does. Her eye seems small, but it's hard to tell because you didn't draw the other one, so there's nothing to really compare it with. Her head seems kind of big too, especially the forehead. Try taking a copy of the picture and putting a layer over it with a basic design of the head - the circle with the lines where everything should be placed: http://artyfactory.com/portraits/images/proportions_of_a_head_2.gif (For reference if you're not sure what I mean, I suck at explanations sometimes). Either way, you know how to draw a face but it's the proportions that seem odd. But proportions is always the biggest issue lol. MiNNiCK Posted at 9:34 am on Sep. 18, 2008 I like it, except that her jaw seems a little big acalypha Posted at 9:34 am on Sep. 18, 2008 the lips need to be evened up on the left side, but apart from that it's really good =] shen10200 Posted at 9:33 am on Sep. 18, 2008 oh i like it All 7 previous replies displayed.