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katjassidekick Posted at 5:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008
Please point out some things I can work on. I've already pinned these things down myself from self-critique:

I should really take my time and do the shadows more carefully.

And yes, there is a signature on there on the bottom right but I didn't want people to see my last name.

-Note: it isn't a portrait of anyone. Well, my intentions were no one, really, but it ended up sort of looking like me.

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ElephantStone Posted at 2:21 am on Nov. 5, 2008
well are we aiming to do a realistic drawing or a cartoon? Because it succeeds in the latter.
ininjateddybear Posted at 6:40 pm on Nov. 4, 2008
I love it
MR UNKNOWN Posted at 8:09 pm on Oct. 27, 2008
your proportions are off

red = you (based on noes)
green = correct (based on eyes)


correct me if I'm wrong because I'm still new at this

katjassidekick Posted at 5:41 pm on Oct. 27, 2008
Quote: from Riot at 5:40 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

Hmm....
I think it should be a bit longer and narrower.

What should be longer and narrower? I mean, I'm not saying that your opinion is wrong, but if you mean the face, you can't really judge that unless I had a picture source.

Riot Posted at 5:40 pm on Oct. 27, 2008
Hmm....
I think it should be a bit longer and narrower.
XxPaperFlowersxX Posted at 5:39 pm on Oct. 27, 2008
I love the eyes. You have a very talented skill.
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