Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic another colored pencil drawing Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]YeahBoii[/m] at 4:10 pm on Oct. 31, 2008[quote]The apple one you posted last night was better but its still good.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post MR UNKNOWN Posted at 4:07 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 bahh it doesn't look perfect but I guess I'm happy? 1 hour prismicolor pencils

Replies MR UNKNOWN Posted at 10:28 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 Quote: from MissKate at 1:25 am on Nov. 2, 2008 Definitely work on perspective. Everything looks a bit wonky - especially the bottom of the glass. If that were a real glass it would not be standing up! However it is shaded rather nicely.   The corner of the table looks a bit strange, as morwen said you need to draw exactly what you see and I think on closer inspection you'll find that the table does not have that sharp of a corner. Perhaps practise by using bulkier cylinder shaped items just to get a better idea of perspective, even doing lots of rough sketches should help you to improve your skills. yeah, I think I'm just jumping too fast into this, I've never worked with glass or a transparent bottle before so yeah, MissKate Posted at 10:25 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 Definitely work on perspective. Everything looks a bit wonky - especially the bottom of the glass. If that were a real glass it would not be standing up! However it is shaded rather nicely. The corner of the table looks a bit strange, as morwen said you need to draw exactly what you see and I think on closer inspection you'll find that the table does not have that sharp of a corner. Perhaps practise by using bulkier cylinder shaped items just to get a better idea of perspective, even doing lots of rough sketches should help you to improve your skills. NEGATIVE0 Posted at 12:14 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 work on perspective! MR UNKNOWN Posted at 9:49 am on Nov. 1, 2008 Quote: from morwen at 12:45 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 Concentrate on your lines a bit more. If youre doing still life, draw what you see. For example, the bottom of the glass, is not rounded properly. And the sides of the mouth of the glass in real life are straight but on the right side in your drawing it is slightly curved. Attention to small details is the key. But otherwise good. I <3 Prismacolour. bahh yes, I know I'm still getting used to colored pencil (this is only my second thing I've ever done graphite is easy and you can erase, I don't think it's possible to redo the bottom part of the glass. morwen Posted at 9:45 am on Nov. 1, 2008 Concentrate on your lines a bit more.  If youre doing still life, draw what you see.  For example, the bottom of the glass, is not rounded properly.  And the sides of the mouth of the glass in real life are straight but on the right side in your drawing it is slightly curved.  Attention to small details is the key. But otherwise good.  I <3 Prismacolour. ElephantStone Posted at 8:19 am on Nov. 1, 2008 lacks depth rrachelll Posted at 4:11 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 cool YeahBoii Posted at 4:10 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 The apple one you posted last night was better but its still good. Natsy Posted at 4:10 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 its a bit wonky, but otherwise ok xx All 9 previous replies displayed.