Quoting Post Topic How's my work? Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]Ju5tin[/m] at 6:50 pm on July 2, 2012[quote]First image: I agree with dreamweaver, the hair isn't selected very well. I know a really good selection technique for hair that I could teach you if you're interested (assuming you're using Photoshop). Other than that, it's fine. I'm not really a big fan of the computer-generated background with a realistic image in front, I would have tried using some sort of stylization on the girl instead. But that's just my opinion. Second: Not really a fan of the bold, white spiky font against the dark and clean edges of the background. But technically speaking it's pretty decent. Third: Seems a little tacky to me, not a fan of the background and looks like something someone would make their first time using Illustrator. Fourth: Awesome, I really like it so far. You should do what you did with the text here and apply a similar effect to the second image[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post 6SpiderMonkey6 Posted at 3:08 pm on April 30, 2012 These are some of the picture I have edited, or made. Tell me what you think of them. http://i.imgur.com/JBYOy.jpg http://i.imgur.com/0OqUM.jpg http://i.imgur.com/utuYI.jpg and this was a work in progress http://i.imgur.com/MYzxH.jpg

Replies Ju5tin Posted at 6:50 pm on July 2, 2012 First image: I agree with dreamweaver, the hair isn't selected very well. I know a really good selection technique for hair that I could teach you if you're interested (assuming you're using Photoshop). Other than that, it's fine. I'm not really a big fan of the computer-generated background with a realistic image in front, I would have tried using some sort of stylization on the girl instead. But that's just my opinion. Second: Not really a fan of the bold, white spiky font against the dark and clean edges of the background. But technically speaking it's pretty decent. Third: Seems a little tacky to me, not a fan of the background and looks like something someone would make their first time using Illustrator. Fourth: Awesome, I really like it so far. You should do what you did with the text here and apply a similar effect to the second image JeremyM Posted at 9:45 pm on June 26, 2012 Eh. dreamweaver Posted at 11:28 pm on May 12, 2012 What exactly have you've done on these edits? It would help a lot to understand what exactly you have done and so forth. Otherwise, here's what I can offer as a critique from just looking at them; First image: The only thing that sticks out to me is how her hair was edited. I can tell right off the bat that you feathered it. Editing around hair is difficult- totally understandable. I would have also adjusted the photo of the girl and try to sharpen it. Maybe even try to darken her a little? Not sure, exactly, but I would definitely play around with the contrast and such. The background on another hand, is awesome. Definitely a keeper. Second Image: Looks good. I'm just not sure what it's for... is it a wallpaper for a desktop? Third Image: Same as before. But I think it would be cool if you texture it. At least to see how it would change it. Also, I'm not really digging the background. It just doesn't stick to me- kind of makes me feel like I should skip it just to see what else you have. The style of the background clashes with the style of the emblem in the center. Fourth Image: Looks like you're playing around with texturing. I would love to see the finished product as it appears to be heading in an interesting direction. 6SpiderMonkey6 Posted at 4:44 pm on April 30, 2012 Quote: from Kylesgirl at 3:22 pm on April 30, 2012 The first is beautiful Thanks, I took around 30 flares to make the background:) Kylesgirl Posted at 3:22 pm on April 30, 2012 The first is beautiful chaosdisown Posted at 3:19 pm on April 30, 2012 The first one isnt stunning to me. the second would be cooler if it didn't have a blaring title right in front of my face. the third one isnt too stellar. the last one looks pretty neat. All 6 previous replies displayed.