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RememberTheName Posted at 3:11 pm on July 18, 2006
I have taken a few pictures over the past couple of weeks that I wanted to post. Can I have some constructive criticism on them? Or just comments? :)

I know this one really isn't a great photo, but I thought the face was cool.

I changed the colors in the following one, so don't think it came strait off my camera.

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Devil Jin Posted at 2:24 am on July 26, 2006
THe dog is very cute.
MoonlitEden Posted at 3:15 pm on July 24, 2006
I am in love with the sleepy doggy one.
ilovecookies Posted at 4:27 am on July 23, 2006
Shiznit that's some awesome resolution.
music junky Posted at 1:55 pm on July 22, 2006
thats so kool!!!
check out my image basket tell me wht u think of Teddy
RememberTheName Posted at 1:48 pm on July 22, 2006
Thank you! Especially heirofslytherin and cutie2. I'll keep those things in mind.
FallenAngel1991 Posted at 11:11 am on July 22, 2006
those are gorgeous...love the first two.
heirofslytherin Posted at 3:29 am on July 22, 2006
First one - Nice usage of the micro system if you used it. But definitely some space for improvement. Colour wasn't that captivating.

Second one - I don't know about you but I love black and white shots. It's harder to capture expression cause it's black but you managed to, so way to go.

Third one - Despite what you said, I actually really like this one. I could really feel the hype of the crowd. Good job incorporating the hand signals in the picture. But then again I might be giving a bias judgement cause I love black and white so much.

Fourth one - Compared to the other flower shot, this is way better colour wise but angling and composition might need some work. It's a good picture but it's not great. It's a normal picture, thats all I can say.

Fifth one - This one felt like a traveller just shooting something they thought was interesting. There was no particular angle for this shot. It looks flat, hence defeating the purpose of this phto cause you want people the feel as if the bark and the carving was alive. Texture is important.

Sixth one - This one is good but lack the originality. Basically you see this shot everywhere in post card and whatnot.

One piece of advice. A picture that makes people go wow has to be one of originality. Try finding different angles of capturing a photo, play with the colour functons. maybe try cyan. Remember it is not the object but the way you picture the object to be that makes it great.

cutie2 Posted at 1:57 am on July 22, 2006
That's a very cute fluffy doggy.

I reckon in the first one perhaps it would be better if you took the flowers either fully in the picture, or significantly cropped at the side, rather than cutting off the slightest part of the petals. I'm not sure if it would or wouldn't be nicer without the hoopy thing in the background, too. The grass coming in might be better edited out.

Same with the birds in the bottom; I'd try not to cut objects off with the edge of the picture when they're the focal point/s of the photo.

It could be cool to try taking those same objects from different angles, trying to capture their essence rather than their full forms. The flowers at the top, for instance, could be really interesting if you got them from a low angle, or if you only included a quarter of them in the picture. Experimenting is always fun!

Anyway yes, pretty photos. That face in the tree is really cool.

afichic4life9872 Posted at 7:34 am on July 21, 2006
AW. ME <3 DOG. [:
LimeWire Posted at 2:29 pm on July 19, 2006
your pictures are good. i really liked the first one  
mooble Posted at 7:12 pm on July 18, 2006
the sun flowers and the birds are pretty nice. Try to increase the contrast a bit for the black and white ones. (levels in pse, curves in cs2)
RememberTheName Posted at 5:12 pm on July 18, 2006
Thank you everyone!
RamonesLover Posted at 3:31 pm on July 18, 2006
cool photos
NightShades Posted at 3:26 pm on July 18, 2006
Wow they're brilliant!
I love the dog, yellow flowers and the birds.
starry night Posted at 3:23 pm on July 18, 2006
those are nice
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