-- Posted by HangEmHigh at 10:08 am on June 26, 2008 I'm writing a story over the summer and it's about this 16 year old who falls in love with a guy who's 40 (I know I know   ) and she's already got a boyfriend. But she keeps her affair with this 40 year old secret and... I don't know what else to do with it!! Anyone have any good ideas for a twist or anything please? -- Posted by SpM at 10:09 am on June 26, 2008 It turns out she was adopted at birth and the man is her biological father? -- Posted by HangEmHigh at 10:10 am on June 26, 2008 Haha nice =) -- Posted by X ffion x at 10:11 am on June 26, 2008 Quote: from SpM at 10:09 am on June 26, 2008 It turns out she was adopted at birth and the man is her biological father? That's a twist..Haaa, it's funny. :) xoxo -- Posted by ThaFish at 10:20 am on June 26, 2008 Wow that happened to me (I mean when I was 16 my gf went off with a 40-year-old and kept it a secret). If you want a real-life twist, the forty-year-old pretends to be moving to Dubai in order to try and get rid of the girl, but the girl's sister's friend is the daughter of this woman that the guy is having an "affair" with, and so the girl finds out and eveything falls apart. Guy blames girl for ruining relationship, girl's mum finds out, meets man down the pub and punches him in the face. Man subsequently ruins his relationhip with woman, get banned from pub for violent behaviour, puches his one remaining friend (his ex-wife who he was staying with) and is never seen or heard from again. Everyone wins. Except him.