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-- Posted by drjpk at 7:15 pm on June 27, 2008

Even

I can see the glint in your eye
I can see the spring in your step
I can see ive fallen into your trap
I wish i couldve seen it before
God, youre such a fucking whore

Oh, its too late now
Ive fallen down heart first
To know i trusted and loved you
Makes it that much worse
I should have known
By how much yur lies have grown
But i wont sit here
And bitch and moan
Oh, oh no

Ill get even
Im leavin
And youll soon be beleivein
Its over
So over
Get over yourself
I dont need you
Wont see you
When it all comes down

You can see the tear in my eye
You can see the fear in my step
Think you can see who i am
Honey, i am not that man
Im strong to walk away

Oh, its too late now
My hearts harder, you see
To know you thought you owned me
Makes it hurt more when i leave
You shouldve known
Id figure it out in the end
But all you wanna do
Is sit and pretend
Its okay


-- Posted by Lally at 7:16 pm on June 27, 2008

For a guy, thats pretty good. Keep workin on it, and it'll be a hit single.


-- Posted by sportsfreak26 at 7:18 pm on June 27, 2008

no i am not commenting on that


-- Posted by SLe3piinBeAuTii at 7:31 pm on June 27, 2008

its sucks!


Lmao I didn't read it, dont plAn to.


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