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-- Posted by well well well at 8:45 pm on June 27, 2008

When you said that you grew up,
I knew immediately...
That what you really did,
was you'd grown out of me.

Because you're there in tough times,
To help me pull through.
I help you, too, but good times
Never happen with you...

Because you said you'd text me later,
But later never came!

And you left my best friend hoping,
and you left him waiting in the rain.

And, girl, you're a heartbreaker,
But you've just got no shame!

And I guess I could still be jealous,
but I guess that would be vain.

Because you say they hate you!
And say they berate you!
They all wanna date you!
Girl, nobody hates you!

There was everything, then little.
The occasional 'what's up'.
And you're changing right in front of me.
Yeah, I guess you grew up.


-- Posted by mcrfool at 8:47 pm on June 27, 2008

it's ok..


-- Posted by honeybee3333 at 8:47 pm on June 27, 2008

coolness.
wat it about?


-- Posted by citigurl3 at 8:48 pm on June 27, 2008

thats sad... very good though, good ryhme!


-- Posted by Xhiddenartist17X at 8:48 pm on June 27, 2008

it's eh


-- Posted by ninjakittymaster at 8:53 pm on June 27, 2008

sounds like my boyfriend if you change the genders up :/


-- Posted by AnacinCross at 8:57 pm on June 27, 2008

Using stuff like texting in poetry/music will likely only make sense to our generation. It kind of shortens the life of it.
Your decision, but it's generally better to not use those kind of references.


-- Posted by BikerTeen at 1:39 am on June 28, 2008

meh i don't like


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